Wednesday, October 28, 2009

“I’m on ,my way to my bus stop, I’m on my way to my bus stop.” scaredy student hummed. Once scardey student was at his stop he waited for about 5 min where he stands alone in his germ proof suit until his large yellow bus comes
“Ah finally” the bus has come, but wait, what is that? Is
it? Can it be? “NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO”
It’s the-the leetteerr…. That you put in front of “un” to make something that you enjoy. “No, I can’t take that bus. Not with that letter on it.” What should I do? Should I run? Should I scream? “I DON’T KNOW!!” Oh well that makes it easier I’ll scream, and run! So frightened Fred bolted for about a block then he slowed down to a stroll.

1 comment:

  1. A start - information and ideas are clearly limited at this point, as is the story's sense of direction. Give me more!
    Ideas - 1
    Organization - 2

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