Have you ever thought that an animal could change your life or get you into something you never knew about? Probably not, but at the end of my story. I think you should be able to believe it.
It all started when my grandpa got a new boarding horse. She was gorgeous, soft, and cuddly. She was my favorite, she was a black pony that was pregnant at the time but she was still the most beautiful horse. After a couple months the owners started to not pay rent. And my grandpa’s rule is the “if you don’t pay boarding then my grandpa gets the horse.” My grandpa got the horse but once she had her baby the owners the baby and left him the horse. He diden’t want her. His girlfriend didn’t want her. But I did she was my dream horse. She was perfect, she was not to tall for me, she was nice and calm, and she was beautiful. She was all I ever wanted. I loved her.
As I woke up to the sun on my eyes on a Saturday morning I could hear my mom rushing around the house cleaning up. I wondered why she was in such a hurry to make the house clean? Wait what was today, it was my birthday! I must have had such a good sleep that I forgot. I was going to be a 2 digit number, 10! After I got my presents my mom drove me over to my grandpa’s to get my present from him. Wow the horse look beautiful she had braids in her hair and she was out of her pen. She was my birthday present!
I kept her there for awhile, until I brought her home and I heard about barrels, I showed her the pattern and she ran right away. Without me even guiding her. She was my dream horse, she was perfect. She showed me the life I’m wining $100 in now from barrel racing. Just from one horse.
Now can u see a horse changing your life? Well I could see it all along. But she was my “Dream Horse”
Wednesday, November 18, 2009
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I like how you started with a question it adds lots of power
ReplyDeletewow i think the bigining of your story is very good i like it becase it makes you want to reed more very good job
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